Loneliness by Rupam Phukan
November 15, 2011
Loneliness wanted a friend…and I was the choice…
I saw the autumn leaves falling down the road.
And a west wind took them away beyond my hold;
autumn was sitting lonely and crying…
I was wandering why not death comes to me so easily..!!
My fear of death was suppressed by my feelings of love;
but God took her away from my sight
and left me alone;
and the gap between her and me was filled up by those
empty words..’I Love You..’
I became the solitary poet
writing poems of my life’s tragedy
and loneliness was my friend who was sitting beside me
and crying for the sake of my
half-complited love story;
my dreams. My promises
hang upon the life’s broken frame
and thanks to loneliness
who was my friend on those cruel days of emptiness and wagon of pain……!!!!
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It’s really a great poem…it has so much feelings..really great job dear……,,, keep writing such good n sweet poems!!!well done!!!
Good one. Keep writing.
i cud see the void in ur wrds
but “half completed love story” ?
what do u mean by this ?
Does getting ur love wd u is everythng which the define the completeness of Love ?
well – i suppose Love is all abt sacrifice and devotion. To love ur Love through the core of the heart even if the circumstances were nt favorable enough to make u meet , is the real love and it makes sense too.
so my frn enjoy the loneliness wd d fond memories of ur love
…
keep scribbling such nyc wrks
🙂
god bless u