6 Comments to “Full Circle”

  1. Lakshmi rajan

    Sep 1st, 2010

    ah love the time line effect to the story!

  2. mani

    Sep 2nd, 2010

    thanks Rajan! You are a dear. :)

  3. Gyanban

    Sep 2nd, 2010

    There are a few ways to look at this presentation.

    1. that this is but one long story with timelines interjected.
    2. each of the time lines have a significant impact on the story.
    3. each time line within itself is a story,and connects to the big picture.

    So while I read this story I kept these points in mind & I liked the reversing effect certainly and also some of the character sketches.Some minor tweaks here and there like some sentence rephrasing and words like ‘cummon’ notwithstanding , this story has shaped up quite nicely.
    Good job.

  4. Sankhya

    Sep 2nd, 2010

    I wonder how you do it? You know, the whole join the dots thing… and Voila! You get a nice tightly wrapped story out of chunks which seem disconnected.. Liked this one a lot!

  5. Kshitij

    Sep 2nd, 2010

    Really liked the reverse effect. Great job Mani.
    While reading, I was like. ‘shit… why didnt I ever get this idea of reverse timeline…’
    Good one!

  6. mani

    Sep 4th, 2010

    @ GB thanks. I m glad you liked it. Umm btw the commmon was PB’s idea. :P
    @Sankhya- coming that from you , I take it as a huge compliment.Thanks
    @ Kshitij- I get the same feeling when I read yours , the only difference is that I choke on the words due to uncontrollable laughter after reading them :)


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